Super.Hero is our first choral poem with contributions from all of the students in Literacy Arts. We thought about important people in our lives and then imagined we were superheroes who could do anything we wanted take care of our loved ones.
Super.hero
Give my strength
Go back in time
People would have less stress on their mind
Children would have money for college tuition
Parents wouldn’t have to worry
I’d go to Mexico, cross the bridge and bring my two brothers with me
Help my mother learn English
Get Dad a better job and more money
Super.hero
Give my strength
Go back in time
I’d bring my sisters and stepbrothers to the U.S.
Help my dad get his job back
Get my sister her own business
I’d get my mom off drugs
Go back in time to say good-bye to my grandpa
Grandma would have her own farm with all of the animals she wants
I’d give my little brother the strength he needs to pursue his music career
Make his small business a big business
Super.hero
Give my strength
Go back in time
Grandpa would still be here on earth
Making all of my family
All the people I love have smiles on their faces
See my father full of life
Help my mother work so she can go home and rest
She works hard
I would make her young again
People wouldn’t have to die too soon
Mom didn’t have to suffer in her childhood
Dad would never go back to jail
Curtis would see his dad all the time
Super.hero
Give my strength
Go back in time
Help my family
Make them laugh
Buy my mom the house of her dreams
Make my brother a pro soccer player
Help my Auntie Dee with her legs because they bleed a lot
Destroy autism for my brother
I’d help my cousin find confidence in herself, get out of the hospital, and stop thinking that the only way things will get better is if she dies
Super.hero
Give my strength
Go back in time
Give F students straight A’s
My sister would be smart and write fast and speak better
I would change a friend’s mind about dropping out of high school
Young people would get out of the gang life
Block Marcus from the bullet
Tonya would have a boyfriend that really loves her and her baby
Girls would never get raped
Super.hero
Give my strength
Go back in time
We are only human but
Our poems will never fade away.
58 comments:
hi my name is nyadoar. (NEE.AH.DOOR) .i am a very colorful nice person..myy favoritte bookk is crank
MY NAME IS JOANNE RUSSELL AND MY FAVORITE BOOK IS CASH MONEY I FORGOT THE AUTHOR..
i like this poem because i dirent know i was writing a poem
J.H:this poem is all about true events
Hi my names karina,I like to play volleyball and the title of my favorite book is Emako blue
my fav book iz basketball drills
My name is Vang. I don't have a favorite book, but most books i read is interesting. Everything on the poem seems to fit together well.
My name is Johna and i'm shy but not shy when i get around my friends.I don't really have a favorite book i just like to read books that can keep me interested in them. In the poem that we read so far it was good and i connected with a lot of stuff that was being brought out in it.
my name is Henry and i like to play guitar.
the poem "super, hero" was great.
but... Mrs. Elate, i don't think Ebe can do that much of things only in one day! (even he is a supper man)
My name is Joseph. I like sky diving and my i dont have a favorite book.I thought the poem was good.
hi my name is anna and i like to read books
MY NAME IS BREE KOGER AND I LIKE TO HANG OUT WITH MY FRIENDS AND FAMILY.MY FAVORITE BOOK IS "grindn" AND I LIKE TO READ URBAN FITION BOOKS(HOOD BOOKS)....I ALSO LIKED THE POEM SUPER HERO IT WAS VERY INTERESTING AND I THINK IT WAS INSPIRING.THE POEM WAS THE TRUTH...LOL
My name is Anadela Perez. I like to read interesting books like drama,romance,and scary.My favorite book is Holes
i like how all our ideas came together.
My name is Erica
something about me is that i got 2 brothers and 1 sister
I don't got a favorite book
I Think it was nice writing a poem
My name is calvin and i play basket ball....
don't have a favorite book but i like to read many kinds... and i like this poem because of what it means
im jenna, i lyke 2 serious by an author named Darren Shan. They are called The Demonata Series and The Cirque Du Freak serious.
hey my name is Rosendo and something about me is that im a bboy (breakdance)
and i dont like books
My name is Sade and what I think about "SUPER,HERO'' is that he talks about things thats happening in world today. In the text he said that young women does not have to give their baby's up for abortion and drop out of school. He said that if college was free they don't have to do that, they could keep going.
my name is star my favorite book is to kill a mocking bird i believe that this poem i very touching wish i could have been apart of the making of it altho i was
not apart of it its still great!!!!!!!!
My name is Tyshawn and my favorite book is stanford wong flunks big time because it shows you can have bad grades but turn those grades around and get to play all the sports you wanna play instead of messing up and having to go to summer school and make it up.
my name is Gustavo V i am soccer player
my favorite book is action......
i like to poem because is about thue events....
my name is Kayla... like to play basketball... my favorite book is hood rat... i like this poem because he talks about saving people lives
hello my name is Omar i like to play soccer . my favorite book is A Raisin in the sun.
hi my name is Darlington I like to play basketball and play video game with my friend
MY NAME IS KC I LIKE TO PLAY FOOTBALL I DONT HAVE A FAVORITE BOOK
i like this poem because i connected to the poem instantly.
A.G.
Hey! I like to play sports with my friends..
The book i like is named November Blues
hey my name is Grecia and i like to make friends every were i go.... and my favorite book is new moon!!!
my name cristian i don't really like books and i dont have a favorite book
this poem is nice
MY NAME IS SILVIA .I LIKE TO PLAY SOCCER, MY FAVORITE BOOK IS THE TWILIGHT I THINK IS AN INTERESTING BOOK...
my name is cesar and i like reading commic books i think the poem says a strong message
my name is zach n my favorite book is where the red fern grows
Eduardo Ortiz
Hey my name is Eduardo, i like to play soccer with my friends.....and my favorite book is new moon.
My name is yahya and my favorite book is series of unfirtune of events.The author name is lemon snicket
my name is zach n my favorite book is where the red fern grows
My name is dedrick and my favorite book is basketball drills i didn't really like it it was cool do
I am student Edison high school. my name is Habiba my fevirat book is faction book and my goal to go college.
my name is Jama i live MPLS MN. i am student at Edison Highschool. i like to play soccer a lot my favorite book is Pele is about a profesional soccer player.
my name is Xailor. I live in minneapolis. i go to Eedison High School. My favorite book is
my name is chris and i am a cool person ta be around
i thought this poem was cool cause we all made tha poem with all of are thoughts
My name is Ahmed Abubakar. I am from Ethiopia and i used to speak 5 languages, but now i only speak two languages.
what i think about the poem is that it makes it perfect when you work as a group. That way you also make
a perfect poem.
my name is josh...i am a fun loving person...and my favorite book is "The Boy Who Couldn't Die."
Hi! My name is Kayla. I am a very quite person. My favorite boo is "A Child called It". I really enjoyed reading the poem. But only once after like the 5th time it got a little boring.
my name is caleb. i am a jehovahs witness and i am willing to help and be a friend to anyone who needs it.
Hola!!..My name is Johanna Ortega.
my favorite book is never a land by dave barry.
J.O:Super man for a day is about how he felt...
Hey what's up? my name's Topacio Kegan. And i like to help people who needs it. my favorite book is Breaking Dawn
hi im RJ...and
i am a new student attendin to edison high school
well i really dont have a favorite but ....but i think
you have heard enough...
the poem my super hero for a day was really touching..i liked connecting with the text.
WELL WHAT I THINK ABOUT THE IS THAT
IT IS REALISTIC AND TRUE..
IT BRINGS OUT ALOT OF THINGS AND CATCH MY ATTET
ATTENTION...SO I REALLY THNKIS ITS A NICE PEOM
UMMM WILL MY FAVORITE BOOKS ARE NEW MOON, AND ECLIPSE.. THEY ARE WRITED BY THE SAME PERSON WHICH IS STEPHENIE MEYER.... :) DOSE 2 BOOKS ARE REALLY COOL TO READ..:)
hello my name is dee. i think that poem is a great poem. i very like it and when i read it is like sad too....
my favorite book is monster that book is very good i very like that book... i think u should read it....
You superheros have words that are so powerful. I am inspired by your dreams and hopes! Peace.
Ms. Emily
My name is Kadari Jackson...... And personally, I favor the " Young as You Are " poem. It really stands out and speaks to me, as well as it should send a message to others. The poem basically restates the saying....
" Be All You Can Be ". Young as we are, do all we can do, be all we can be. Have a positive outlook on life and no goal is too far or incapable of obtaining.
My name is Kadari Jackson...... And personally, I favor the " Young as You Are " poem. It really stands out and speaks to me, as well as it should send a message to others. The poem basically restates the saying....
" Be All You Can Be ". Young as we are, do all we can do, be all we can be. Have a positive outlook on life and no goal is too far or incapable of obtaining.
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